Improve the bracket part if needed.
One night they sank through the shiny water, and for the first time (since he has known them, began to quickly swim.)

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Improve the bracket part if needed.
One night they sank through the shiny water, and for the first time (since he has known them, began to quickly swim.)

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he knew them, began to swim quickly

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he had known them, began to swim quickly

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he have known them, begin to quickly swim

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No improvement

Q. Improve the bracket part if needed.
One night they sank through the shiny water, and for the first time (since he has known them, began to quickly swim.)

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Q. Improve the bracket part if needed. One night they sank through the shiny water, and for the first time (since he has known them, began to quickly swim.)

Discusssion

Q. Improve the bracket part if needed.
One night they sank through the shiny water, and for the first time (since he has known them, began to quickly swim.)